PSNZ Digital Group 12 - Karen Talbot
Cycle 3
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Image 1 - Before
the sun rises - Okuru Lagoon, South Westland
This was so peaceful. I was
intrigued by the minute ripple which made the reflection unique. |
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Image 2 -
Dusk at Okuru Lagoon. South Westland
I loved the magic light
that comes after the sun has sunk. It is quite surreal. I
think a lot of people miss the few seconds after the sun has gone,
but it really does pay to stay.......
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Karen's
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Comments from Digital Group 12 Please email your comments before the end of November 06. |
| Image 1 - Before the sun rises - Okuru Lagoon | ||
| Bob McCree | ||
| Doug Moulin | 22/3/07 |
A very tranquil scene which
suits the panoramic format very well. The subtle colours have been
captured beautifully.The horizon doesn't appear level but this could be
an illusion due to the curvature of the lakes edge. Some might argue
that the white area where the sun has set is blown out but that is often
how it looks to the eye. |
| John Barnes | ||
| Mark Brimblecombe | Nice ripples in the water. It would be good bring out the faintest detail in what is currently a black band of bush. Cropping a little of the bottom might add a little more impact. | |
| Bill Hodges | 24/4/07 |
Nicely exposed giving good tonal range. Good over all balance . Just
hasn’t got the impact or interest
to hold me. |
| Peter McMahon | 29/6/07 |
like the format and those beautiful morning tones. Shame there was not an object to give the image a bit more impact |
| Shona Kebble | 20/6/07 |
I like the panoramic crop
of the image and the tones of the receding hills. Lovely light and
reflection. |
| Image 2 - Dusk at Okuru Lagoon. South Westland | ||
| Bob McCree | ||
| Doug Moulin | 22/3/07 |
Another lovely serene
panorama. The only comment I would make is that I would prefer a large
crop off the top to focus my attention on the beautiful light on the
edge of the lake. |
| John Barnes | ||
| Mark Brimblecombe | Very nice. I would crop out most of the sky. | |
| Bill Hodges | 24/5/07 |
I feel this image is need to been under exposed by one or two stops to
bring out the colour that is there. Try using levels in photoshop Input
125 1.00
255. |
| Peter McMahon | 29/6/07 |
nice tones,just lacks contrast and again that something to focus on for impact. Try a longer lens and much less sky. |
| Shona Kebble | 20/6/07 |
What a lovely place it is.
I feel this has too much sky making the horizon very central. Nice
tones. |
Cycle 2
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Image 1 - Near Lake
Heron Taken with Canon 20D 17-85mm canon lens (my favourite) |
Karen's Comments: I liked the interesting textures created by man challenging the landscape..our wonderful high country. (click here to email comments to Secretary) |
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Image 2 - Towards
Erewhon same lens as before. |
Karen's
Comments: My first attempt at a stitched panorama..I took 4 images, overlapped by about 30% and "stitched" them in Photoshop. (click here to email comments to Secretary) |
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| Bob McCree | 20/2/07 |
Do you need all that sky? Your image is in the fenceline (a nice diagonal) with the background hills there to hold your interest into the image, thus, I would crop the sky down to just above the lower clouds. A little less exposure (adjustment in levels) would be helpful too. Better still, go back in a lower lighting condition! |
| Doug Moulin | 7/2/07 |
This shot has a ton of potential. Good composition with fence leading the eye in. More contrast and colour saturation would give it a bit of punch. If it were me I would crop out the isolated cloud at the top, a small crop off the bottom and crop the left to almost halfway to the first post. I think there is a little too much ground to the left of the first post. |
| John Barnes | ||
| Mark Brimblecombe | 6/2/07 | Excellent photo of clean 'green' NZ. I love the colours and the composition. Perhaps a little more intensity in the blacks needed.... looks like Peter has a the same idea. |
| Bill Hodges | 10/1/07 |
Nice lead in line with the fence. Well composed. I feel the exposure could underexposed by half a stop giving more impact to the image. |
| Peter McMahon | 4/1/07 | love the South and visited Lake Heron for the first time this year. Nicely composed image, but would be greatly improved with more contrast.I may have made this comment on your first images. My suggestion is to make a Levels adj. try these "input 12 .83 228 " the image should come alive!!! it is a start. If you have a problem with this, send me a mail. |
| Shona Kebble | 16/1/07 |
I do like the fenceline leading into the hills behind and the contrast of the grass with the bare paddock but it could do with the late golden sunlight to give it more drama. |
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| Bob McCree | 20/2/07 |
Good sewing, Karen! Perhaps a little more foreground to balance the sky and an exposure adjustment to bring out the depth of colour in the hills and sky would be helpful. |
| Doug Moulin | 7/2/07 |
Well stitched up!! A nice panorama. Like the first shot, it would benefit with a little less exposure and a little more contrast and colour saturation. I would have liked to see a little more foreground and a little less sky, but I realise that there might have been something there that did not suit. |
| John Barnes | ||
| Mark Brimblecombe | If you hadn't told us about the Photoshop stitching then I would not have picked it has a panorama.... just a nicely cropped photo. Well done. Must try more of this myself. It's great to get ideas from others in this group. :-) | |
| Bill Hodges | 10/1/07 |
A very well stiched image giving a lovely panorama. Great depth of interest looking up the valley to the mountains. Underexposed a half a stop or in levels bring the level up to give it more impact. |
| Peter McMahon | 4/1/07 |
nice to see a panorama, an area that I have been working on and enjoy. Lovely subject and well handled, but again lacking in nice contrast. Try Levels adj. "18 90 228" should bring out the lovely mood and colour. |
| Shona Kebble | 16/1/07 |
Well done on your first stitched panorama. The image(s) is well exposed and shows the majesty of the hills. It could be given a little more punch by increasing the contrast slightly and darkening the blue sky. |
Cycle 1
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Title- Stormy sunrise.
Camera- Canon 20D
Lens -17mm-85mm prob about 17mm
original file- raw
colour temp- as shot
Probably "warmed" a little in
Rawshooter Premium. White sea lifted a little also.
Taken on a very wet morning in South
Westland in July 2006
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Haast Valley- July 2006
Canon 20D
Raw file
17mm-85mm Prob at 17mm
Colour temp- as shot
Reduced to sepia in CS2 . The
feeling of isolation of the place I felt was enhanced by the
sepia tones.
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| Image 1 - Stormy Sunrise | ||
| Bob McCree | 30/10/06 |
Nice mood in this one Karen but rather too burnt out in the highlight areas. Some darkening around the right hand side of the image would help contain the brighter areas. |
| Doug Moulin | 29/10/06 |
A moody atmospheric shot with lovely lighting on the cloud. The foreground and the sea need to be sharp. In spite of this, it is still a very nice image. |
| John Barnes | 11/10/06 |
I like the moody scene. It may be my monitor, but there appears to be a halo around the rock and the sea horizon/coastline on the left side. |
| Bill Hodges | 23/10/06 |
Lovely Colours. Liked the sea to be more in focus |
| Mark Brimblecombe | 8/10/06 | I like the composition. Could be darker overall. |
| Peter McMahon | 23/9/06 | lovely moody image, with nice mono tones. I am concerned with the focus and the burnt out highlights in the waves |
| Shona Kebble | 28/10/06 |
I like the composition of this image and the pastel tones. The sky could be burnt in a bit more for extra drama and careful cloning around the land could get rid of the halo effect. |
| Image 2 - Haast Valley | ||
| Bob McCree | 30/10/06 |
I can almost feel the damp here, Karen. I like the arrangement of the hills but again I would like to see the left hand and top edges darkened off a little to help hold the eye into the image. |
| Doug Moulin | 29/10/06 |
I like this very much, moody and mysterious. I wouldn't change anything. |
| John Barnes | 11/10/06 |
This is a nice image I agree the sepia adds to the overall image. Lovely composition and the mist in the valley portrays the Haast Valley very well |
| Bill Hodges | 23/10/06 |
The sepia tone has made this into a very nice moody image. |
| Mark Brimblecombe | 8/10/06 | This is a fantastic image Karen. At first I thought it would be good to see some blacks in the closest bush, but then the misty setting might make this look artificial. So I've nothing more to say. |
| Peter McMahon | 23/9/06 | like the composition and the beautiful moody mist and clouds. love the sepia |
| Shona Kebble | 28/10/06 |
The monotone sepia effect is well used here and enhances the feeling of the image. Again I would like to see the top left corner darkened down as my eye keeps going up to the bright cloud and out of the image. |