PSNZ Digital Group 12 - Shona Kebble
Cycle 3
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Image title: Bethels
Beach
taken with Canon 5D, 1/25th at f16, 17mm lens |
Shona's
Comments:
This was taken in the
evening. I noticed the cloud forming and positioned myself to
use it as a lead in to the watchtower.
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Image Title: Rodeo
taken with Canon 5D, 1/500th at f6, 260mm focal length |
Shona's
Comments:
Also taken at the Warkworth
Rodeo (nice to see you there Peter) and played with to create a
painting effect. As if I had nothing else to do but it was
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Comments from Digital Group 12 Please email your comments before the end of January 07. |
| Image 1 - Bethels Beach | ||
| Bob McCree | ||
| Doug Moulin | 3/4/07 |
Lovely lighting and
composition. The sea and cloud lead the eye nicely toward the subject
matter. I don't see any way to improve it. Well done. |
| John Barnes | ||
| Karen Talbot | 8/5/07 | Love that warm evening light, it really does bring the image alive. Clever placement of cloud !!!!How long did you wait for it? It does give one the feeling of a warm summer evening. |
| Bill Hodges | 24/4/07 |
Strong image Love the clouds leading into the tower. Good overall subject placement Lovely colours Good detail on the tower |
| Peter McMahon | 29/6/07 |
super image showing great colour, composition and impact |
| Mark Brimblecombe | Oh yes... fantastic. I've been to Bethels beach many times looking for this shot! Great image in my opinion. |
| Image 2 - Rodeo | ||
| Bob McCree | ||
| Doug Moulin | 4/4/07 |
A nice image. Good rodeo
shots are hard to get because the background is always distracting. The
painterly treatment works very well here and the darkening of the
surrounds makes the subject stand out. My only constructive comment is
that it might be cropped a tad too tight. But that's nit picking. |
| John Barnes | ||
| Karen Talbot | 8/5/07 | I really like the effect you have given this image, Shona.I am not a great fan of rodeo shots- bit like seen one, seen them all, BUT I really like this one. |
| Bill Hodges | 24/4/07 |
Great well caught action image. Would like to see it without the
painting effect which I feel it spoils it. |
| Peter McMahon | 29/6/07 |
yes Shona, it was a great morning. Wonderful action shot, however I think spoilt by the treatment. Filters can be overpowering and in my opinion should only be used to compliment or subtly enhance the image |
| Mark Brimblecombe | I'm not sure about the Photoshop art filter. Very interesting. Otherwise a great photo... excellent composition. Nice colours. it would perhaps be good to see the faces behind the fence... which I guess you can without the filter. |
Cycle 2
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Image title: Petals
Camera: Canon 5D Lens: 105mm macro Exposure: f8, 1/85sec ISO: 320 Tripod used |
Shona's
Comments: I was photographing some flowers one evening and was wanting something different so I placed these petals on a lightbox and held a reflector over the top. I have rotated the picture to give it a more pleasing angle. (click here to email comments to Secretary) |
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Image Title: Bush
Stream
Camera: Canon 5D Lens: 28-105mm taken at 75mm Exposure: f11 at 1/5 sec Iso: 400 Tripod and polarising filter used. |
Shona's
Comments: This image was taken on a very wet drizzly day at the Trout Hatchery in Turangi.
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Comments from Digital Group 12 Please email your comments before the end of January 07. |
| Image 1 - Petals | ||
| Bob McCree | 20/2/07 |
A delightful image, Shona. I love the composition and the softness and delicacy of the colour. Very well done! |
| Doug Moulin | 7/2/07 |
Nice subtle colours and tones and good composition. I would like a sharper point to focus on nearer the centre of the image as my eye wanders around the extremities which are sharp. Still, very nice! |
| John Barnes | ||
| Karen Talbot | 4/1/07 |
I love these, Shona, the softness of the colours and the composition is very pleasing. I can not even find anything to "nitpick". |
| Bill Hodges | 10/1/07 |
A good soft focus flower image. The subject placement I have trouble with. Its been well exposed and focused in the right places . Maybe darken the corners so your eye comes into the main subject. |
| Peter McMahon | 28/12/06 |
love the concept, beautiful colours and lighting a very pleasing image. |
| Mark Brimblecombe | 6/2/07 | Great idea with a great result. Must try this. |
| Image 2 - Bush Stream | ||
| Bob McCree | 20/2/07 |
Nice lighting and colour, Shona. I might prefer a tighter composition concentrating on the fernery on the right as I feel the left hand side and the area at the top of the image are not contributing much to the balance of the image. |
| Doug Moulin | 7/2/07 |
Good exposure here has shown up all the green tones nicely but I find the image a little unbalanced with the ferns on the right and very little on the left. |
| John Barnes | ||
| Karen Talbot | 4/1/07 |
I love our NZ bush but find it really difficult to photograph.It is hard to keep it simple.There are so many elements in this image making it very complicated. A lovely peaceful spot. |
| Bill Hodges | 10/1/07 |
A well taken bush scene. Wouldn’t be out of place on any postcard or calendar. Its has depth of interest, been well exposed and the focus is sharp through out the image. Its been well framed. |
| Peter McMahon | 28/12/06 |
lovely bush scene, with great colours that are well handled. Nice composition held together with that beautiful fern on the right. The bottom right portion of image would also make for a strong image as well. |
| Mark Brimblecombe | 6/2/07 | I'm not sure I like this photo or not... or whether I need to or not. Very good exposure and composition. I guess it needs some further interest in it for me... someone catching the trout or a bathing wahine! So Shona, put that camera on a tripod, set the self-timer, and jump in! |
Cycle 1
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Image title: In the
Dandenong Mountains
Camera: Canon 5D
Lens: 100 - 400, exposed at
400mm
Exposure: 1/8 sec @ f16
Tripod used.
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Shona's
Comments: This was taken while on a walk in the mountains on a foggy morning.
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Image Title: Lake Wakatipu
Camera: Canon 10D
Lens: Lake - 28 - 105mm,
taken at 28mm.
Man - 90mm
Exposure: Lake - 2 secs @
f16.
Man - 1/80 sec @ f8
Lake - Tripod used. Man -
no tripod.
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Shona's
Comments: This image is made up of two images combined in Photoshop. The lake image was very blue as it was taken after sunset so I toned the face to match.
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Comments from Digital Group 12 Please email your comments before the end of November 06. |
| Image 1 - In the Dandenong Mountains | ||
| Bob McCree | 30/10/06 |
So typically Aussie with nice counterpoint with the brightly coloured parrot. I love the background trees but, oh for a longer lens?! |
| Doug Moulin | 29/10/06 |
A beautiful photograph. I like the subtle tones of the trees contrasting with the bright red bird. There's nothing more I could add to improve this image. Well done! |
| John Barnes | 22/12/06 |
Just a lovely image. The red bird on the branch does not distract me and in fact I feel it makes the image stronger |
| Karen Talbot | 10/10/06 |
I love the gum trees' soft colours, but find the superb bird distracting. Maybe some of the horizontal stick could be "taken out". It would not divide the image . |
| Bill Hodges | 29/10/06 |
Well seen and very well taken. The bird gives the image impact |
| Peter McMahon | 23/9/06 | real great Aussie bush tones, with the crimson of the parrot, drawing the eye right into the image. Have you tried a tighter crop, to bring the parrot closer? |
| Mark Brimblecombe | 28/10/06 | I put this image up on a very large screen with my data projector, and it looked fantastic. I can't suggest any improvements. I would not crop it. I do like the black framing border you have put on this. |
| Image 2 - Lake Wakatipu | ||
| Bob McCree | 30/10/06 |
I love the concept of this image and the generally muted, monochromatic tonality, which adds greatly to the mood. Just a suspicion of disconnect, perhaps, with the man looking out of the image? |
| Doug Moulin | 29/10/06 |
A powerfully constructed image. I like it. If I wanted to be a nit-picker, maybe something could be done about the clouds coming out of his head but I'm not sure what. |
| John Barnes | 22/12/06 |
It took me a while to get the feel for this image. The face is quite striking and I find myself looking at the face rather than the surrounds. It is well done and different and there are two images in this composition but my view is the two would be better standing alone. They both have strong features. Some good Photoshop manipulation though |
| Karen Talbot | 10/10/06 |
I do like this image, Shona.How would it look reversed? Our eye naturally goes L to R, I think you would be able to look into the image easier.Really nit picking tho,,,,,,,, |
| Bill Hodges | 29/10/06 |
I feel that the lighting on the mans face would be more effective if the he was reversed and on the right of the image as the light is coming down the lake from the left. |
| Peter McMahon | 14/10/06 |
nice concept,with good potential, but feel it is a little too soft. Just wondered if the face needed more strength. What about mono face, giving more tonal contrast to make the image stand out . |
| Mark Brimblecombe | 28/10/06 | Very nice photoshop work. Like the composition. What I don't like is the lighting on the person's face. The light source is clearly not the same as for the landscape, or rather from the same angle. I know they are two different pictures combined in Photoshop, and there is little that can be done now to change the lighting on the face. But a more subtle 'fill in' lighting on the face would have worked better in my view. |
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